Pretty

Very pretty and very stylish, well concieved. I believe it needs some sort of insight into the whole 'why he is leaving', or some sort of resolution. A bit of scene cutting to make it more involving, although design wise you're on the mark.

You have permission to marry my wife.

Upon comprehensivley introducing me to the the techique of camera control, my lower jaw dropped so low I crushed two of my toes.

I have no idea why you are so, so helpful to strangers but I assure you that when I become rich and famour, expect a cheque or a nice car in the mailbox. (Depending on how big your mailbox is).

You, my friend, are a legend.