say goodbye Pretty
Very pretty and very stylish, well concieved. I believe it needs some sort of insight into the whole 'why he is leaving', or some sort of resolution. A bit of scene cutting to make it more involving, although design wise you're on the mark.
My milkshake bring all the boys to the yard.
Luke Constable
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